Narrative Writing

One day there were two friends their names were Jack and RJ. They went into the desert to look for their friend because he was lost. They were going to get two camels to take them to the old desert houses to see if he was there. They found him on one of the houses, he had been bitten by a scorpion. We took him to the nearest hospital "please hurry I'm dying". We arrived in time. He was saved so he could go home.